Saturday, March 10, 2012

1st Essay


The above is Jerilyn's first essay of about 50words. I suggested most of the sentences and I helped to spell some big words. What I am sure of is I didn't suggest the last sentence. I asked her why she only mentioned Ah Yee and Yee Cheong but not us. The Gong Gong part was added later. She said that this is because we (Mummy & Daddy) are here with her but Ah Yee and Yee Cheong are far away.

She wanted me to send this essay to Ah Yee. She was so serious that she folded the letter inserted into the envelope. Maybe I should send to Ah Yee, shouldn't I?

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